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Chapter 3036 Must Take A Shortcut

Ye Jian, who was talking with Qin Xiu, hadn’t noticed the jealous man, who was behind the trees and green belts, with his vision slightly obstructed. “I can’t say that I’ve suffered because I like what I’m doing, so I don’t feel any hardships. I also can’t say that I’m tired. Because if I’m tired, I can sleep and rest ...

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bm.sedat
5 years ago

Honestly, I have waited to write an objective review and finished reading available chapters before doing so.

First, the theme is not bad. A person on the peak gets betrayed by his close friends. Then he reincarnates a few thousand years later.

We see that these ~10000 years haven’t changed anything and all he knows are still available but of course the main body’s memories also helps this.

But then we see nothing else about this. We only read that his temper is unique, but that’s all.

He suddenly becomes able to refine pills at one point but there is no good explanation how or when.

The pace is quite fast but fast pace means no good details.

The MC is simply stupid, he says it’s dangerous to do something but he still does it. He should have lessons for how stupid others can and can betray him easily but he still trusts others easily. When he was just a trash a few months ago, he can become a patriarch of the family. An influential merchant can easily trust him and there is no reason to do so.

Full of cliches, no character development and no good world building.

We only see “sword cultivators” and there is no consistent usage of the levels of cultivation. Literally everyone uses a sword.

It’s explained heavy sword is useless multiple times, then at one point, suddenly to contrary it’s stated it’s actually helpful but one chapter later it also is stated it’s useless.

I believe this is an amateur story and I hope the author can actually improve themselves in the future.

It was a quick read even though I didn’t enjoy it a lot, it helped me to pass some commute-time.

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Kingcen
5 years ago

He needs to show more power and moves. Because of the individual he’s dealing with. We need to know more about his past.

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