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Chapter 4954 The Cutest Person

Ye Jian, having just organized the female soldiers for guard duty, realized that the gala night was about to start. She and Xia Jinyuan hadn’t rehearsed yet, so she went to find him. She lightly knocked on the partially closed door. A voice from inside said, “Please come in.” She pushed the door and saw Xia Jinyuan packing his bags. ...

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mjkj
4 years ago
Aaawww… so nice… 💗
I really hope Lyra finds the courage to tell her parents and Nicole…
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With such words, the whole room fell into *silent*.
= *silence*
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‘Worry not, you may not be able to tell, but I can read people very well, so I *know she’s* joking from the start.
= *knew she was*
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Pretty sure that *Familiar* couldn’t be found easily just like that.
= either: *Familiars*
= or: *a Familiar*
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Nicole also patted me *in* the head.
= *on*
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We couldn’t talk for too long as it *would be* pretty late already, so we finally said our goodbyes and went our separate ways.
= *was*
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When we were done *putting our* things, the twins quickly wanted to play with Fenrir.
= missing word: *away* or *up* = When we were done putting *away* our things, the…
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“Lyra has a Familiar *too now*?
= turn around, comma = “Lyra has a Familiar *now, too*?
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I’m glad *it’s* all just a dream.
= *it was*
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I could tell that he was really a pro at it, as expected of a Familiar who’s lived for a long time, and *who’s* had several partners before!
= *who*
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kaeruil
4 years ago

Awesome, kinda saw the familiar thing happening but still awesome it happened. Now our little Lyra needs to confess to her parents and Nicole about her reincarnation.

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Lukasz
4 years ago

thx

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