§ I asked Bruna to set up this conference in the first place in order to tell them exactly what Astaroth gained from the formation. Before I learned that people were somehow reappearing in Oseri, I sent this group with what I thought would be sufficient information, so I didn’t need to bring in spiritual concepts unfamiliar to Huade’s present-day ...
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On a Discord post, I mentioned running into a continuity problem. It was nothing big, but I wrote much of this chapter with Lady Feraen much more central to the conversation, with an implication she was considerably older and more experienced than I had previously implied.
In an earlier chapter, I had described her and Dilorè as having a tryst back when Dilorè was Tiana's age, and Feraen defended herself as having been only barely an adult at that time (which would put her in her early two hundreds.) This would make her younger than Amana, and thus considerably younger than I was implying in this chapter.
I couldn't simply swap her out for Serera, the way I wrote it, but fortunately, I remembered Kottos was present, and was actually a much better choice. It did require an almost total dialog rewrite from about a quarter way into the chapter to the end, though.
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