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Chapter 622 – Alarm

§ In the evening hours, all the Lower Pendorian combat mages and their support troops crammed onto Pasrue’s air boat, embarking on Diurhimath’s raid into Parna. A few hours later, Morrígan arrived in Oseri via projection to assist the fairies as they began the initial steps to dismantle the formation buried beneath the town. This small one was not present ...

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As previously mentioned, this is a complete rewrite of what I would have posted on Saturday. Not to go into all the reasons, but suffice it to say, writing a little bit at a time in brief chances to write is neither an efficient way to write, nor an effective one. Anyhow, this actually contains about 2/3s of the events of the original chapter, but shown rather than told, with the rest moved more appropriately to a following chapter merging up with all the stuff I wasn't able to squeeze in. In other words, these chapters are the non-abridged form.

This story probably feels like it is moving too slow, but I went back a reread, and it is an artifact of my slow pace of writing. This is just a really bad place in the narrative, with so many moving parts in play, to have only one chapter a week, sometimes every two weeks. For that, I can only apologize, because there is not a lot I can do about it. I can only hope it is still enjoyable.

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