This story a girl who was madly obsessed with aot died and reincarnated into the anime but it was different. She was reborn after all the events happened and she soon discovered that all they did was for nothing. So in this world she hope to help as much people as she can and finally stop the cycle.
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i was scrollling trough shikarito and i noticed that you were translating someone other than kusuriya no hitorigoto i read trough this and i really like it !(not as much as kusuriya no hitorigoto of course but its still good i was wondering if you will be contuining this after your break?
Thanks for the chapter!!!
In terms of mistakes…my only comment is that there are too many unnecessary commas. They might have made sense in the original text, but in English, they are either awkward and break the flow of the sentence or are just grammatically incorrect. “I’m also, angry. That was, too careless.” -An example where neither comma makes sense. Just thought I’d point it out!
Can AuriCa delete my posts suggesting spelling, grammar, or punctuation changes after ta reads them? I am loathe to publicly criticize.
Use the extra room to garrison her guards! I’d want a wall of strong battle giants if I were in her position: a strong-skilled, but socially-inept, female in a world of preators. Mariela admitted that she has no battle skills.
I’m not suggesting the story line, rather am commenting that a woman *should* have such fear. Lynx seems to have a realistic grasp on Mariela’s vulnerability.
I would also be thinking of a ‘businesss’ to cover for my potion income.