Life is an unfair game. If you were born rich and smart, then you were more than likely arrogant and cunning. If you were born poor and dumb, you were probably simple and ignorant. A commander is someone who protects his people regardless of their faults, position, and riches, but the Number One Commander is someone who would even protect the Galaxy itself.
Join Luon Fate, an engineer and a bookworm simpleton who changed the fate of humanity. Orcs? Elves? Demons? Cultivators? Follow Luon in another fantasy, sci-fi, martial artist novel in the making.
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Mairym
5 years ago Buena historia.. atrapa.. al personaje le falta un poco de madurez pero me gusta como es…
Excelente escritor!!!!
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Mighthose
5 years ago The writing Quality is quite good, its easy to understand and not hassle to read.
The theme of Space opera fantasy world is a unique approach to space opera.
The story development is normal, not fast but also not slow its just that the school arc could have been more longer with more stories in between.
Character design is quite lacking for example Arisa being a vampire but she doesn’t show her vampire nature at all (ex, In the Survival Training arc where she was wounded heavily, She could have taken Luon’s blood instead of Luon doing “CPR” on her) and she using some kind of dark element sword skills, wont that make her look cool?
The world building is good but its kinda feels like it has both [Skyfire Avenue] [Predator] vibe but all in all its good and i hope for more improvements.
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