“A mirror?” she wondered, rubbing the smooth surface with her slender fingers.
“What’s so special about it? It looks so ordinary.”
“Just not a plain mirror,” replied the grandfather. His gaze distant, his voice was hoarse as he explained. “It’ll change your life to the deepest core. Here, since it is your sixteenth birthday, I’ll pass it to you as a present. Perhaps one day, you'll thank this old bag of bones, ah?”
“How will it change anything?” she retorted, tapping the pristine yet dull surface. “You must be joking! Always prancing about how I need to be more vain, so mean!”
“You will see in due time,” was the reply.
You will see in due time. Just how a single, useless mirror will change your life in many ways unexpected by anyone.
Grandfather was indeed correct. An Fei could not help but admit it. The mirror had completely changed her life, just as he had said.
Only, was she presented hell, or a new life?
Because….
A single mortal girl, thrown into the chaotic bastion of ancient legends and myths. A bastion containing the hopes, will, and despair of mortal and immortal existences alike.
When all deceit is stripped from the foundations of the world to reveal the cold, bitter truth, how will she survive?
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Buena historia.. atrapa.. al personaje le falta un poco de madurez pero me gusta como es…
Excelente escritor!!!!
The writing Quality is quite good, its easy to understand and not hassle to read.
The theme of Space opera fantasy world is a unique approach to space opera.
The story development is normal, not fast but also not slow its just that the school arc could have been more longer with more stories in between.
Character design is quite lacking for example Arisa being a vampire but she doesn’t show her vampire nature at all (ex, In the Survival Training arc where she was wounded heavily, She could have taken Luon’s blood instead of Luon doing “CPR” on her) and she using some kind of dark element sword skills, wont that make her look cool?
The world building is good but its kinda feels like it has both [Skyfire Avenue] [Predator] vibe but all in all its good and i hope for more improvements.
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