Ning Meng Yao looked down at Tang Tang who was hugging her tightly. She picked her up and hugged her. “Mummy, you and Daddy are finally back! Tang Tang misses you.” Tang Tang looked at Ning Meng Yao aggrievedly, and hugged her neck tightly, not letting go. Ning Meng Yao looked at Tang Tang a little helpless, Qiao Tian Chang ...
Black iron sounds cooler than dark steel for a group name.
There is no way those cookies don’t cause some issue. Either straight aphrodisiac or love potion or they are a magical viagra meant to let a person keep going without tiring out so to speak.
Thanks for the chapter. I’ll send my notes the usual way (which you’ll probably find first).
Unless you have a good reason to change it, I think you should stick with what you’ve already been using. Black Iron makes me think of a dark metal, whereas Dark Steel sounds more like some fictitious material that isn’t actually related to iron/steel.
I prefer ‘Black Iron’ because it implies a less refined product.
Note: I haven’t stepped foot into an RPG since the days when my dungeon master used pencil on graph paper.
why did he say “im here” what is that suppose to mean??
also how often are you gonna post new chapter of this novel ?
