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…As man would know to be true in its most purest of sense, having something taken from you is a pain that ravages the very fabric of one’s own soul. We don’t like pain as human beings, I don’t like pain nor the feeling of being unable to do anything to stop things being taken from me…As thou takest from me, know I will take from you many fold to the least of your powerless existence can hold to its own.

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Alex, a boy born of a mother who had already been taken from him by drugs, abuse, boyfriends, and a wounded soul that didn’t want to piece itself back together. He had been born into a world of darkeness from the start yet, he knew kindness like no other. He never blamed his mother nor his absent father for what happened to him, as he only blamed the one that can control one’s course of life.
God.
The one being he hated most for what was done to him, to his life, to his mother. She was not a bad woman at one point in time she even became clean and had a nice little apartment but then she met Mark. He took her away again and from there Alex knew that he was but a plaything for this so called ‘God’ that watches over them.
One day as he came home he found Mark with multiple other men raping his mother, she was bleeding from wounds all over her body…burn marks…cuts from a knife sitting on the floor next to them…bruises from the brass knuckles they had on their hands…

BABOOM…

I’ll kill all of you, I’ll take everything from you as you have done to me…

BABOOM

…Alex took the lives of all the men there because of his sneak attack, he was fatally wounded in doing so but at least he got his revenge. Laying down next to his mother Alex looks at her and realizes she’s trying to say something, so he leans in and hears the words he’s wanted to hear all his life…

“It’s not your fault my little Alex, I’m sorry that I couldn’t fulfill the role of your mother…I would give anything to take it back, I love you my baby boy…”

Alex was in pain like he never felt before, he finally realized that he was loved, his mother never gave up on him she just didn’t have the strength to bring the change that was needed. As Alex’s waning conscious was leaving behind its last prestigious he thought to himself…

‘Never again will I have something taken away from me, I will grow so strong that nothing will be able to stand in my way...I am coming for you O’ God or whosoever took from me that was rightfully mine…’

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Hi everyone new author here as of this moment rn I have lots of life issues going on so this book might not even ever be found but hey atleast I tried like I’ve always wanted to . Anyway since I’m new to this whole sha-bang any criticism is welcome just be nice I’m already dieing inside , and any suggestions you guys might have is really appreciated! If you guys have any names you want to be used shoot’em on down in the comments or if there is any skill you want to be implemented somewhere(can’t be the mc he’s already got his shakashaka boombooms down) once again throw them down in the comments haha alrighty I hope you guys enjoy the story(if it comes out that is ) have fun y’all